Advice???

[BIG SHANE]

yo could yall check my music and gimme some tips or advice to step my game up

THANX ne comments will be much appreciated





http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page...?bandID=543775

[Skailz]

A whats good Shane, I tried to check you down but there was nothing to check. Maybe the link expired or something like that. Post up something new and i'll holla back.

[BIG SHANE]

sorry bout that...


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=543775

[Skailz]

Okay, I just checked out your songs. There's Still Hope is my favorite one. I was wondering what you are using to make your beats. It sounds a little bit like some of the stuff I've used on Fruity Loops. All of the songs you have are nicely arranged, but I think you could use some more stronger sounds. You definitly have some skills, just maybe need to flip up a couple things. Get back at me and let me know what you're getting down on, I might be able to throw you some info. on equipment with good sounds.

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[BIG SHANE]

thanx for the advice im gonna use it to improve ne one else... im always up for advice holla

[poorsod]

What synth are you using? They all sound like the GM presets that come with a consumer soundcard. Get a good DAW or soft-synth like Cubase Studio 4 or Reason and write your own sounds. It'll sound a lot more organic that way: at this rate I didn't want to get further than the first few bars.

Quite harsh criticism, but it'll do you good in the long run.