Any Tips

[akkie]

Hi there folks would like any tips on how to improve this tune..its still under progress but any help would be apreciated.

http://www.mp3unsigned.com/showmp3.asp?mp3id=35885

[Snuggles]

I like the song just the way it is. You might get a better response from the folks at homerecording.com
http://homerecording.com/bbs

[Sonic Valley]

Ya, they got a great mp3 critique forum. Great site.

[akkie]

cheers guys